EK GHAZAL=SUNTE HAIN, RAQEEBON SE MULAAQAAT KARO HO

Kuhnah mashq ShoAraa kaa kalaam jo beHr meiN hounaa zaroori hei

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EK GHAZAL=SUNTE HAIN, RAQEEBON SE MULAAQAAT KARO HO

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sathiyo!
aadaab!
ek ghazal ap sab ki nazr hay, pasand aey to zaroor aaggah farmaiye.
asaatizah-kiraam ki raey ki bhi muntazor rahoongii.
khair andesh
najma
:-)

arz hay
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saathiyo!
aadaab
aap meiN se kuch saathii hamarii ghazal ko urdu
hamarre kuch saathiyoN, khusuusi taur pe waqar sahib najm sahib aur khurram ko hamari ye ghazal urdu meiN nazar nahii aasakii, lihaza ab ham, un ke hukm ki ta,meel meiN, ise roman meiN bhi pesh kar rahay haiN.
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sunte haiN, raqeeboN se mulaaqaat karo ho
phir jee ko jalane ki wohii baat karo ho

mazloom ko soolii pe chaRhaa dete haiN haalaat
aiy dosto! kya shikwa-e-haalaat karo ho

karne ko maiN wa,doN pe yaqeeN kalooN tumhaare
har roz magar tum to naee baat karo ho

is darjah sulagte huey mausim meiN bhi logo!
zondah ho agar tum, to karamaat karo ho

jannat se nikaale huey insaan ke beTo!
dunyaa ko bhi dunyaa-e-kharaabaat karo ho

apnoN ki sii chaahat hay na GhairoN ki sii nafrat
dunya se niraalii hiihar-ik baat karo ho

saawan ka guzartaa hua baadal tha wo NAJMA!
tum jis ke liye ash,koN ki barsaat karo ho

NAJMA ANSAR NAJMA
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Dear Najma jee,
aadaab,

aap kee ghazal paRh kar mohtaram buzrug shaa'ir Kaleem Ajiz kee aik ghazal yaad aa ga'ee jiss kee bhee yahee zameen thee, voh ghazal tau mujhe yaad naheeN hai magar aik she'r kaa aik misra' yaad hai jo ke kuch yooN hai shaayad:
"daaman pe koyee daagh...........
tum qatl karo ho yaa karaamaat karo ho"

aap kee ghazal pasaNd aayee aur khar taur par matla' buhat khoob hai,
daad qubool kijiye!

mukhliS
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Post by najma »

naheed sahiba!
aadaab

wo sher, yuuN hay

khanjar pe koee khoon na daman pe koee daaGh
tum qatl karo ho ya karamaat karo ho


ghazal pasand karne aur hausla fazaaee ke liye bohat shukriya
khush rahiye
najma
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Kaleem Ajiz:

daaman peh koyee ch`eeNT nah Khanjar peh koyee daaGh
tum qatl karo ho keh karaamaat karo ho

Sarwar A. Raz :Sarwar:
yooN aur bohat a'ib haiN :Sarwar: meN wa-lekin
kambaKht muHabbat meN to yaktaa nazar aayaa

Sarwar A. Raz :Sarwar:
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Post by Ibn-e-siddique »

Najma baji

salaam arz hai

aap ki ye ghazal dekhi aur bahot pasand aayee

matle ke misra-e-caani meiN "vohi" munasib nahin lag rahaa, ye sirf meri zaati raaye hai jo ghalat bhi ho sakti hai ;)

she'r no. 2 aur teen to paRh ker lutf aa gayaa :

mazloom ko sooli pe chaRhaa dete haiN Haalaat
ae dosto !! kia shikva-e-haalaat karo ho

karne ko yaqeeN kar looN maiN baatoN pe tumhaari
her roz magar tum to nayee baat karo ho

bahot khoob, deegar ash'aar bhi pasand aaye, maqta bhi khoob hai :)

amjad
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
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Post by najma »

Sarwar Raz wrote:Kaleem Ajiz:

daaman peh koyee ch`eeNT nah Khanjar peh koyee daaGh
tum qatl karo ho keh karaamaat karo ho

Sarwar A. Raz :Sarwar:

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janab sarwar a.raz sahib!
saheeh she,r batane ka bohat shukriya
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najma sahiba, aadaab!

aap kii Ghazal pasand aayii. daad qubuul farmaaiye!

niyaazmand,
Irfan :Abid:
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ghazalk nazar hi nahi a rehi mujhay
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waqar_masood wrote:ghazalk nazar hi nahi a rehi mujhay
hellooo...JOIN the CLUB :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Ibn-e-siddique wrote:Najma baji

salaam arz hai

aap ki ye ghazal dekhi aur bahot pasand aayee

matle ke misra-e-caani meiN "vohi" munasib nahin lag rahaa, ye sirf meri zaati raaye hai jo ghalat bhi ho sakti hai ;)

she'r no. 2 aur teen to paRh ker lutf aa gayaa :

mazloom ko sooli pe chaRhaa dete haiN Haalaat
ae dosto !! kia shikva-e-haalaat karo ho

karne ko yaqeeN kar looN maiN baatoN pe tumhaari
her roz magar tum to nayee baat karo ho

bahot khoob, deegar ash'aar bhi pasand aaye, maqta bhi khoob hai :)

amjad



azizam amjad!

((matle ke misra-e-caani meiN "vohi" munasib nahin lag rahaa, ye sirf meri zaati raaye hai jo ghalat bhi ho sakti hai ;)))

shukriya. maiN is ke bare meiN sochoongii :-)

aur baqi jo ash,aar aap ko pasand aey, main mamnoon hooN.
hausla-afzaaee ka bohat shukriya
khush rahiye
ab shukriya meiN aur kya kahooN?
kuch phool pesh karooN?
lol

lijiye
hazaroN----------lol
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najma ji abhi bhi nazar nahi a rehi ..ab to mein log in ho ker aya hoon phir bhi....................
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waqar_masood wrote:najma ji abhi bhi nazar nahi a rehi ..ab to mein log in ho ker aya hoon phir bhi....................






:o
herat hay waqar sahib!
auroN ko to nazar araha hay aur reply bhi kiya :o .
ek baat poochooN?
aap ne apne interner service k wajibaat ada kiye haiN :roll: ya naheeN :P

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khair---mazaq bar-taraf
waqaee he herat ki baat hay.
deegar nazireen se guzarish hay keh agar unko nazar araha hay to bataiye pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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najma wrote:sathiyo!
aadaab!
ek ghazal ap sab ki nazr hay, pasand aey to zaroor aaggah farmaiye.
asaatizah-kiraam ki raey ki bhi muntazor rahoongii.
khair andesh
najma
:-)

arz hay


Assalaam o alekum,



Najma baaaji aapki yeh ghazal sabko nazer aarahi lekin mujhe kyoon nazer nahin aarahi ??? :roll:
RISK IS MY BUSINESS
DANGER IS MY GAME
DONT PLAY WITH ME
BCOZ KHURRAM IS MY NAME
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khurram_shaikh wrote:
najma wrote:sathiyo!
aadaab!
ek ghazal ap sab ki nazr hay, pasand aey to zaroor aaggah farmaiye.
asaatizah-kiraam ki raey ki bhi muntazor rahoongii.
khair andesh
najma
:-)

arz hay


Assalaam o alekum,



Najma baaaji aapki yeh ghazal sabko nazer aarahi lekin mujhe kyoon nazer nahin aarahi ??? :roll:

khurram!
sorry, keh apko nazar nahii aarahii.chashma laga ke dekhiye shayad------

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Bahut khoob

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MuHtarama
Najma Saahibah,

Purkhuloos Tasleemaat, :oops:

Mujhe tou achchi TaraH se nazar aarahi hei aur beHad pasand aayii.

Pahle souchaa ke is ghazal per tafseeli tabsirah karuN aur uski aek copy bhii apne computer per naql karlii. Raftah raftah aek aek sheAr paRhtaa gayaa. Bahut hii luTf aayaa. Bahut hii khoobsoorat aur dilkash ghazal hei.
Is liye yeh mukhtasar saa tabSirah pesh karne per majboor hougayaa.

Meri jaanib se dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmayiye. Ummeed kartaa hooN ke aayindah bhii aapko isi TaraH daste_e_kamal Haasil rahegaa.


Aapka Mukhlis,
Nazir.
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