yaaraan-e-meHfil: aadaab-o-tasleemaat!

ek Ghazal le kar HaaZ^ir huwaa hooN. aap meN se kuch` eHbaab ne yeh Ghazal shaayad kaheeN aur dekh`ee ho gee. lekin is bazm ke liYe nayee hai! (kam se kam meraa yehee Khayaal hai!) aap kee raaYe kaa intiz^aar rahe gaa. shukriyah peshagee qubool farmaaYeN!

Sarwar A. Raz "Sarwar"
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Ghazal:

muHabbat! ph`ir us kaa bayaaN! Allah Allah!
zameeN ho gayee aasmaaN, Allh Allah!

huyee aarzoo ph`ir javaaN, Allah Allah!
koyee ho gaYaa mehrbaaN, Allah Allah!

sar-e-t^oor-e-i'rfaaN yeh t^oofaan-e-Hairat?
Hijaabaat-e-kaun-o-makaaN, Allah Allah!

bh`alaa kis t^araH miltee manzil Khudee kee?
Sanam-Khaanah-e-een-o-aaN, Allah Allah!

nah meraa gulistaaN, na meree Khudaayee
magar hai Gham-e-aashiyaaN, Allah Allah!

use Dh`hooNDte Dh`hooNDte kh`o gayaa maiN
saraab-e-yaqeen-o-gumaaN, Allah Allah!

Khudaa ban gayee meree yeh Khud-shanaasee
huwaa jab maiN Khud per a'yaaN, Allah Allah!

magar zindah hai chaar-o-naachaar "Sarwar"
taqaaZ^aaYe-daur-e-jahaaN, Allah Allah!
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Sarwar A. Raz "Sarwar"

Sarwar Raz wrote:yaaraan-e-meHfil: aadaab-o-tasleemaat!

ek Ghazal le kar HaaZ^ir huwaa hooN. aap meN se kuch` eHbaab ne yeh Ghazal shaayad kaheeN aur dekh`ee ho gee. lekin is bazm ke liYe nayee hai! (kam se kam meraa yehee Khayaal hai!) aap kee raaYe kaa intiz^aar rahe gaa. shukriyah peshagee qubool farmaaYeN!

Sarwar A. Raz "Sarwar"
==========================
Ghazal:

muHabbat! ph`ir us kaa bayaaN! Allah Allah!
zameeN ho gayee aasmaaN, Allh Allah!

huyee aarzoo ph`ir javaaN, Allah Allah!
koyee ho gaYaa mehrbaaN, Allah Allah!

sar-e-t^oor-e-i'rfaaN yeh t^oofaan-e-Hairat?
Hijaabaat-e-kaun-o-makaaN, Allah Allah!

bh`alaa kis t^araH miltee manzil Khudee kee?
Sanam-Khaanah-e-een-o-aaN, Allah Allah!

nah meraa gulistaaN, na meree Khudaayee
magar hai Gham-e-aashiyaaN, Allah Allah!

use Dh`hooNDte Dh`hooNDte kh`o gayaa maiN
saraab-e-yaqeen-o-gumaaN, Allah Allah!

Khudaa ban gayee meree yeh Khud-shanaasee
huwaa jab maiN Khud per a'yaaN, Allah Allah!

magar zindah hai chaar-o-naachaar "Sarwar"
taqaaZ^aaYe-daur-e-jahaaN, Allah Allah!
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Sarwar A. Raz "Sarwar"

JANAB S.A.RAZ :SARWAR: SAHIB!

najma wrote:

Sarwar Raz wrote:yaaraan-e-meHfil: aadaab-o-tasleemaat!

ek Ghazal le kar HaaZ^ir huwaa hooN. aap meN se kuch` eHbaab ne yeh Ghazal shaayad kaheeN aur dekh`ee ho gee. lekin is bazm ke liYe nayee hai! (kam se kam meraa yehee Khayaal hai!) aap kee raaYe kaa intiz^aar rahe gaa. shukriyah peshagee qubool farmaaYeN!

Sarwar A. Raz "Sarwar"
==========================
Ghazal:

muHabbat! ph`ir us kaa bayaaN! Allah Allah!
zameeN ho gayee aasmaaN, Allh Allah!

huyee aarzoo ph`ir javaaN, Allah Allah!
koyee ho gaYaa mehrbaaN, Allah Allah!

sar-e-t^oor-e-i'rfaaN yeh t^oofaan-e-Hairat?
Hijaabaat-e-kaun-o-makaaN, Allah Allah!

bh`alaa kis t^araH miltee manzil Khudee kee?
Sanam-Khaanah-e-een-o-aaN, Allah Allah!

nah meraa gulistaaN, na meree Khudaayee
magar hai Gham-e-aashiyaaN, Allah Allah!

use Dh`hooNDte Dh`hooNDte kh`o gayaa maiN
saraab-e-yaqeen-o-gumaaN, Allah Allah!

Khudaa ban gayee meree yeh Khud-shanaasee
huwaa jab maiN Khud per a'yaaN, Allah Allah!

magar zindah hai chaar-o-naachaar "Sarwar"
taqaaZ^aaYe-daur-e-jahaaN, Allah Allah!
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Sarwar A. Raz "Sarwar"

JANAB S.A.RAZ :SARWAR: SAHIB!
assalam-o-alaikum
hasb-e-ma,mool ek haseen ghazal inayat farmaaee aap ne.

use Dh`hooNDte Dh`hooNDte kh`o gayaa maiN
saraab-e-yaqeen-o-gumaaN, Allah Allah!

Khudaa ban gayee meree yeh Khud-shanaasee
huwaa jab maiN Khud per a'yaaN, Allah Allah!

khusoosiitaur peye ash,aar to bohat hi pasand aaey, lekin poori ghazal hii qabil-e-daad hay.,ihazah bhar-pur daad qubuul kijiye
ek arz:
mehz apni ma,loomaat meiN izafayke liye=======
(kya kisi muqaam par ''allaah'' ki ''hay'' gir jana jaaiz hay?aur agar hay to kin sooratoN meiN? )
khair andesh
najma