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"RaheN aabaad Ya Rub yeh suKhan ki mehfileN yuuN hee...
Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 6:32 pm
by jawaid badauni
RaheN aabaad Ya Rub yeh suKhan ki mehfileN yuuN hee
YahaN jo log aate haiN woh sub aate raheN yuuN hee
RaheN aabaad ya Rub yeh suKhan ki mehfileN yuuN hee
Hamraai mehfiloN meN aaj jo bhee log aate haiN
Woh sub hee dil peh goya abr.e rahmat bunke chaate haiN
Bohat se naam mujhko yaad haiN kuch bhool baiTha hooN
JinheN bhoola hooN unko bhi hameshah paRhta rahta hooN
Hamaari in maHafil ke janab.e :Raz: haiN sarwar
Rah-e sher.o.adab meN :Hazrat.e Nazir: haiN ik rahbar
Janab.e :Qais: yuuN to mehfiloN men kum hi aate haiN
Magar woh jab bhi aayeN sher unke sub ko bhaate haiN
Bohat maSroof haiN :Irfan Abid: apne kamoN meN
Woh tab aate haiN jab FoorSat mile thoRee see shaamoN meN
Magar :Jawaid: aise haiN jo subH.o.shaam aate haiN
Kabhi GazaleN sunate haiN kabhi nazmeN sunate haiN
:Husaini: ka kalaam aisa hai paRhke lutf aata hai
Keh sher oosko hi kahte haiN jo dil ko chhu keh jaata hai
:Zia:, “Mehtab:, :Amjad: haiN :Muzaffar: bhee hain :Haamid: bhee
Gazal aur Nazm le aaya hai koyee Naat bhee koyee
YahaN :Tanveer: bhee aate haiN shamm.e Gam jalaane ko
YahaN :Zoya: bhi aati haiN hamara Gam baTane ko
Hamari bazm meN pardah nasheeN bhee aate jaate haiN
Keh haiN chilman ke peeche she’r woh phir bhee sunate haiN
Woh :Raji: hoN keh :Sara: hoN keh hoN :Anmol: ya :Zarqa:
Sabhee kee fikr dilkash hai sabhee ke sher haiN a’ala
Kalam.e :Tahira:, :Naheed: Sub ke dil ko bhaata hai
Hazal :Shummu: kaheN tou lutf hi kuch aur aata hai
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Bahut khoob, waah waah
Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 11:56 am
by Abdullah Nazir
MuHtarami o Azeezi
Jawaid Badauni SaaHib,
PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,
Aapki nazm beHad pasand aayi jis se shoAaraa aur shaayeraat kee khaatirkhwaah HauSlah afzaayi houti hei.
Is mubaarak tuHfe per meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.
Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.
Re: "RaheN aabaad Ya Rub yeh suKhan ki mehfileN yuuN he
Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 7:14 am
by Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar
jawaid badauni wrote:
RaheN aabaad Ya Rub yeh suKhan ki mehfileN yuuN hee
YahaN jo log aate haiN woh sub aate raheN yuuN hee
RaheN aabaad ya Rub yeh suKhan ki mehfileN yuuN hee
Hamraai mehfiloN meN aaj jo bhee log aate haiN
Woh sub hee dil peh goya abr.e rahmat bunke chaate haiN
Bohat se naam mujhko yaad haiN kuch bhool baiTha hooN
JinheN bhoola hooN unko bhi hameshah paRhta rahta hooN
Hamaari in maHafil ke janab.e :Raz: haiN sarwar
Rah-e sher.o.adab meN :Hazrat.e Nazir: haiN ik rahbar
Janab.e :Qais: yuuN to mehfiloN men kum hi aate haiN
Magar woh jab bhi aayeN sher unke sub ko bhaate haiN
Bohat maSroof haiN :Irfan Abid: apne kamoN meN
Woh tab aate haiN jab FoorSat mile thoRee see shaamoN meN
Magar :Jawaid: aise haiN jo subH.o.shaam aate haiN
Kabhi GazaleN sunate haiN kabhi nazmeN sunate haiN
:Husaini: ka kalaam aisa hai paRhke lutf aata hai
Keh sher oosko hi kahte haiN jo dil ko chhu keh jaata hai
:Zia:, “Mehtab:, :Amjad: haiN :Muzaffar: bhee hain :Haamid: bhee
Gazal aur Nazm le aaya hai koyee Naat bhee koyee
YahaN :Tanveer: bhee aate haiN shamm.e Gam jalaane ko
YahaN :Zoya: bhi aati haiN hamara Gam baTane ko
Hamari bazm meN pardah nasheeN bhee aate jaate haiN
Keh haiN chilman ke peeche she’r woh phir bhee sunate haiN
Woh :Raji: hoN keh :Sara: hoN keh hoN :Anmol: ya :Zarqa:
Sabhee kee fikr dilkash hai sabhee ke sher haiN a’ala
Kalam.e :Tahira:, :Naheed: Sub ke dil ko bhaata hai
Hazal :Shummu: kaheN tou lutf hi kuch aur aata hai
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moHtaram jawaid Badauni SaHeb aadaab!
aap kee yeh naz^m aap ke jazbaat aor aHsaasaat kee tarjumanee kar rahee hai. YooN farda" farda" sabh~ee dostooN ka zikr karna HoSilah afzah amr hai.
khudawand aap ko jaza-e-khaer se nawaze!
YahaN jo log aate haiN woh sub aate raheN yuuN hee
RaheN aabaad ya Rub yeh suKhan ki mehfileN yuuN hee
waah!
Hamraai mehfiloN meN aaj jo bhee log aate haiN
Woh sub hee dil peh goya abr.e rahmat bunke chaate haiN
kiYa kehne!
Bohat se naam mujhko yaad haiN kuch bhool baiTha hooN
JinheN bhoola hooN unko bhi hameshah paRhta rahta hooN
waah ji waah!
Hamaari in maHafil ke janab.e :Raz: haiN sarwar
Rah-e sher.o.adab meN :Hazrat.e Nazir: haiN ik rahbar
baja farmaya hai! waah!
Janab.e :Qais: yuuN to mehfiloN men kum hi aate haiN
Magar woh jab bhi aayeN sher unke sub ko bhaate haiN
waah!
Bohat maSroof haiN :Irfan Abid: apne kamoN meN
Woh tab aate haiN jab FoorSat mile thoRee see shaamoN meN
waah!!
Magar :Jawaid: aise haiN jo subH.o.shaam aate haiN
Kabhi GazaleN sunate haiN kabhi nazmeN sunate haiN
kiYa kehne! waah! khuda kare keh SubH -o-shaam aate raheeN!
:Husaini: ka kalaam aisa hai paRhke lutf aata hai
Keh sher oosko hi kahte haiN jo dil ko chhu keh jaata hai
waah!
:Zia:, “Mehtab:, :Amjad: haiN :Muzaffar: bhee hain :Haamid: bhee
Gazal aur Nazm le aaya hai koyee Naat bhee koyee
kiYa kehne!
YahaN :Tanveer: bhee aate haiN shamm.e Gam jalaane ko
YahaN :Zoya: bhi aati haiN hamara Gam baTane ko
waah!
Hamari bazm meN pardah nasheeN bhee aate jaate haiN
Keh haiN chilman ke peeche she’r woh phir bhee sunate haiN
kiYa khoob hai!
Woh :Raji: hoN keh :Sara: hoN keh hoN :Anmol: ya :Zarqa:
Sabhee kee fikr dilkash hai sabhee ke sher haiN a’ala
waah!
Kalam.e :Tahira:, :Naheed: Sub ke dil ko bhaata hai
Hazal :Shummu: kaheN tou lutf hi kuch aur aata hai
kiYa kehne!
Wassalam
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Re: Bahut khoob, waah waah
Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 4:22 pm
by jawaid badauni
WEBMASTER wrote:
MuHtarami o Azeezi
Jawaid Badauni SaaHib,
PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,
Aapki nazm beHad pasand aayi jis se shoAaraa aur shaayeraat kee khaatirkhwaah HauSlah afzaayi houti hei.
Is mubaarak tuHfe per meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.
Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.
MoHtarmee Abdullah Nazir SaHib, Aadaab
YuuN hee baiThe baiThe ek din socha ek Nazm kahee jaye so kah Daali. Aap ko nazm pasand aaii yeh mere liye baRee sanad hai jise maiN saNbhaal kar rakhooNga.
Ummid hai mizaaj baKhair hoNge. Ramadhan ke bAAd aur tafSeel se mulaaqateN rahengee, insha Allah.
Apka MuKhliS
Jawaid
Re: "RaheN aabaad Ya Rub yeh suKhan ki mehfileN yuuN he
Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 4:25 pm
by jawaid badauni
Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar wrote:jawaid badauni wrote:
RaheN aabaad Ya Rub yeh suKhan ki mehfileN yuuN hee
YahaN jo log aate haiN woh sub aate raheN yuuN hee
RaheN aabaad ya Rub yeh suKhan ki mehfileN yuuN hee
Hamraai mehfiloN meN aaj jo bhee log aate haiN
Woh sub hee dil peh goya abr.e rahmat bunke chaate haiN
Bohat se naam mujhko yaad haiN kuch bhool baiTha hooN
JinheN bhoola hooN unko bhi hameshah paRhta rahta hooN
Hamaari in maHafil ke janab.e :Raz: haiN sarwar
Rah-e sher.o.adab meN :Hazrat.e Nazir: haiN ik rahbar
Janab.e :Qais: yuuN to mehfiloN men kum hi aate haiN
Magar woh jab bhi aayeN sher unke sub ko bhaate haiN
Bohat maSroof haiN :Irfan Abid: apne kamoN meN
Woh tab aate haiN jab FoorSat mile thoRee see shaamoN meN
Magar :Jawaid: aise haiN jo subH.o.shaam aate haiN
Kabhi GazaleN sunate haiN kabhi nazmeN sunate haiN
:Husaini: ka kalaam aisa hai paRhke lutf aata hai
Keh sher oosko hi kahte haiN jo dil ko chhu keh jaata hai
:Zia:, “Mehtab:, :Amjad: haiN :Muzaffar: bhee hain :Haamid: bhee
Gazal aur Nazm le aaya hai koyee Naat bhee koyee
YahaN :Tanveer: bhee aate haiN shamm.e Gam jalaane ko
YahaN :Zoya: bhi aati haiN hamara Gam baTane ko
Hamari bazm meN pardah nasheeN bhee aate jaate haiN
Keh haiN chilman ke peeche she’r woh phir bhee sunate haiN
Woh :Raji: hoN keh :Sara: hoN keh hoN :Anmol: ya :Zarqa:
Sabhee kee fikr dilkash hai sabhee ke sher haiN a’ala
Kalam.e :Tahira:, :Naheed: Sub ke dil ko bhaata hai
Hazal :Shummu: kaheN tou lutf hi kuch aur aata hai
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moHtaram jawaid Badauni SaHeb aadaab!
aap kee yeh naz^m aap ke jazbaat aor aHsaasaat kee tarjumanee kar rahee hai. YooN farda" farda" sabh~ee dostooN ka zikr karna HoSilah afzah amr hai.
khudawand aap ko jaza-e-khaer se nawaze!
YahaN jo log aate haiN woh sub aate raheN yuuN hee
RaheN aabaad ya Rub yeh suKhan ki mehfileN yuuN hee
waah!
Hamraai mehfiloN meN aaj jo bhee log aate haiN
Woh sub hee dil peh goya abr.e rahmat bunke chaate haiN
kiYa kehne!
Bohat se naam mujhko yaad haiN kuch bhool baiTha hooN
JinheN bhoola hooN unko bhi hameshah paRhta rahta hooN
waah ji waah!
Hamaari in maHafil ke janab.e :Raz: haiN sarwar
Rah-e sher.o.adab meN :Hazrat.e Nazir: haiN ik rahbar
baja farmaya hai! waah!
Janab.e :Qais: yuuN to mehfiloN men kum hi aate haiN
Magar woh jab bhi aayeN sher unke sub ko bhaate haiN
waah!
Bohat maSroof haiN :Irfan Abid: apne kamoN meN
Woh tab aate haiN jab FoorSat mile thoRee see shaamoN meN
waah!!
Magar :Jawaid: aise haiN jo subH.o.shaam aate haiN
Kabhi GazaleN sunate haiN kabhi nazmeN sunate haiN
kiYa kehne! waah! khuda kare keh SubH -o-shaam aate raheeN!
:Husaini: ka kalaam aisa hai paRhke lutf aata hai
Keh sher oosko hi kahte haiN jo dil ko chhu keh jaata hai
waah!
:Zia:, “Mehtab:, :Amjad: haiN :Muzaffar: bhee hain :Haamid: bhee
Gazal aur Nazm le aaya hai koyee Naat bhee koyee
kiYa kehne!
YahaN :Tanveer: bhee aate haiN shamm.e Gam jalaane ko
YahaN :Zoya: bhi aati haiN hamara Gam baTane ko
waah!
Hamari bazm meN pardah nasheeN bhee aate jaate haiN
Keh haiN chilman ke peeche she’r woh phir bhee sunate haiN
kiYa khoob hai!
Woh :Raji: hoN keh :Sara: hoN keh hoN :Anmol: ya :Zarqa:
Sabhee kee fikr dilkash hai sabhee ke sher haiN a’ala
waah!
Kalam.e :Tahira:, :Naheed: Sub ke dil ko bhaata hai
Hazal :Shummu: kaheN tou lutf hi kuch aur aata hai
kiYa kehne!
Wassalam
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MoHtarmee Muzaffar SaaHib,
Aadaab
Nazm aap ko pasaNd aai yeh mere liye Khooshee ki baat hai.
Bohat bohat shukriya. Aap bohat Khuloos se aur tafSeel se likhte
haiN aur aap ka yeh "central allignment" wala "style" yaqeenan mun-
farid hai.
Khoosh raheN!
MuKhliS
Jawaid