WEBMASTER wrote:
MuHtaramaat o MuHtarameen aHbaab-e-sukhan,
PurkhulooS Tasleemaat, :rose
Apni aek taazah ghazal pesh karne kee saAadat HaaSil karrhaa hooN. Ummeed ke apni giraaNqadr aara se navaazkar shukriyah adaa karne kaa mauqaA denge.
GHAZAL roman meiN:
Pursish-e-gham kaa taqaaZaa hei nah qurbat kee Talab
Dushman-e-jaaN se bhalaa kiyuN hou muravvat kee Talab
Meraa ieemaaN hei tiri chashm-e-inaayat kee Talab
maqSad-e-zeest nahiN hei zar o daulat kee Talab
paas-e-naamoos-e-wafaa raahnumaay-e-dil hei
Hasrat-e-deed hei izhaar-e-Haqeeqat kee Talab
Wo bhee ab Said-e-sitam-haaye taghaaful kiyuN hei
Kheench laayi jise SeHraaoN meiN reHmat kee Talab
Khoobiy-e-Husn qasaavat peh utar aati hei
Houne lagti hei jab insaaN ko muHabbat kee Talab
Bandagi apni azal se hei shiAar-e-khilqi
Khwaahish-e-madH koiee aur nah ujrat kee Talab
Aayeene meiN mira hamshakl bhee aaye nah nazar
Ai jafaa-kaesh Ajab hei yeh qiyaamat kee Talab
Khaar se kaun bachaataa nahiN apnaa daaman
Barg-e-gul se nah houee kisko nazaakat kee Talab
Ham ko ishrat-kada-e-qaSr se kya maTlab hei
Kab houee khaanah-badoushaoN ko sukoonat kee Talab
MeHv rakhti hei shab o rouz tire Nazir ko
Teri taSveer se baRhkar tiri Soorat kee Talab.
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Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.
moHtaram Abdulla Nazir SaHeb aadaab baja lata hooN!
aap kee yeh Ghazal garcheh do rooz qabl dekh~ne ka sharf HaSil ho geYa th~a. lekin meree khuwahish th~ee keh koee aor dost pehle khamah farsaaee kar le to maiN kuch~ a'rZ karooN!
lekin yeh tamanna ta eeN dam nah bar aaee to socha keh maiN hee pehla qat^ra ban kar baras jata hooN
maiN ne aap kee i'shqiYah shae'eree ko samajh~ne ke liYe Ghazal ke un HiSSoN ka mut^alea'h baGhaoor karne kee koshish kee hai jahaaN shai'er kee apnee aawaaz aor khuSuSa" us ka makhSoos lab-o-lehjah numaYaaN ho geya hai.
aor phir us ka rang, kasak, aor aahaNg janne kee bh~ee Hattal imkaan koshish kee hai. agarcheh hamere beshtar shae'irooN ke haaN ishqiYah laYe meN taSawwuf aor samajee tehzeebee acarat kee rea'naaee miltee hai. lekin aap ke kalaam meN hindustaanee rawaYat aor taGhazzul kee goonj zeYadah gehree ho gaee hai.
aap ke kalam kee aek u'moomee shaan yeh bh~ee hai keh aap wardaat ke dakhlee pehlu tak meHdood rehte haiN.aor waese bh~ee shae'ir dakhlee kefiYaat se bahir kam hee qadam rakh~ta hai.
is naoa'(qisam=t^araH) ka sha'ir rooH kee beqarariYooN, bat^in kee khalish, i'shq kee majburiYooN, ko aek khaaS dard mandee aor kasak ke sath~ pesh karta hai.
aap kee i'shqiYah laeY aek makhSooS jazbah meN Dobee huee hai. aap kee she'iree ka ta'luq agarcheh nafs-e-meHboob se hai lekin dar Haqiqat is ka pehla aor aSal rishtah dilsoozee aor iz^haar-e-dard se hai. jo i'shq meN hijr naSeebee aor tamanna kee namuradee se HaSil hota hai.
baharkaeef! i Ghazal maiN aap ne duniYa se be neYazee, sachchee muHabbat ke HuSool kee khuwahish, hawas kee be aata'daliYooN se lata'luqee, ka barmala iz^haar baRe a'aarifanah aor a'aalimanah perae meN karne kee kamYaab koshish kee hai.
aap kee tazah shae'iree ab haqeeqee Ya majazee keY jazbah se buland ho kar meHeZ^ insaanee aHsaas par mabnee ho gaee hai. aap kee shae'ranah wardaat apna aab-o-danah fit^ree insaanee khuwahishaat se HaSil karna chahatee hai.
Pursish-e-gham kaa taqaaZaa hei nah qurbat kee Talab
Dushman-e-jaaN se bhalaa kiyuN hou muravvat kee Talab
kiYa kehne!! waah! matla' bohot garam hai.
Meraa ieemaaN hei tiri chashm-e-inaayat kee Talab
maqSad-e-zeest nahiN hei zar o daulat kee Talab
