salaam Kausar saaHiba,

aapko is maHfil meN maiN Khush_aamded kahtaa huuN.

aapkii Ghazal paRhi aur paRh kar bahot achchhaa lagaa. aapkii Gahzal ke mazaameen aur Khayaal achchhe haiN magar mujhe lagta hai aapko abhii thoRii mashq kii aur zaroorat hai aur insha Allah jald hii aapkii lagan aur fahm ...

zindagi too rukh-e-zeibaa hai liyey aayi magar
ab na hai dil pe teray husna ke jaadoo kaa asar

teree aankhaun ke yeh rangeen-o-haseen afsaanay
ab na is dil mein talaatum koi laa sakte hein

husn-e-aalam ke taranaun se saje lab terey
dhardkanaun mein na koi raag jaga sakte hein

teray chehray ...