Mohtaram Zia Baloch Saheb
:salaam:

har musalmaan ki deRh eeNt ki masjid hai alag
deen bhii seNkRoN tukRoN meiN baTaa hai to sahii !

Kaise hain aap? Kafi muddat baad apne ek khoobsurat ghazal se nawaza hai.
Ghazal ka har sheir pasand ayaa.
Merid daad aur mubarakbaad qubool farmayen.

Mukhlis ...

Yaaran-e-Anjuman, aadaab !

aaj muddatoN baa'd is KhoobSoorat Anjuman meiN apne tazaha tarahi kalaam ke saath Haazir hooN ! ummeed hai k apnii qeemati aaraa se navaazeN ge !
shukriya

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sar miraa raah ...

muzaffar bhaa'ii, aadaab !

kaise mizaaj haiN ? :)

muddatoN baa'd is bazm meiN kuchh likhne ka moqa' milaa hai ! dilii masarrat se dochaar hooN ! :)
aap kii Ghazal jii jaan se pasaNd aa'ii ! maiN ne bhii is zameen meiN kabhii aek Ghazal kahii thii ! jis ka maqta' aap ko sunaana chaahoN gaa ...

yaaran-e-anjuman, aadaab !

aaj aap ke saamne apnii taazah tareen Ghazal ke saath Haazir-e-Khidmat hooN
ummeed hai k apnii qeemati aaraa aur tanqeed se navaazeN ge ! shukriya

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moHtaram Janaab Sarwar SaaHib, aadaab !

Urdu Shaai'ree meiN to mujhe is tarkeeb ke Haavale se koii micaal yaad naheeN , haaN , albatta Farsi shaai'rii se aek micaal de saktaa hooN fil-Haal !
Maulaana Romi ka aek mash'hoor she'r hai :

عقل در شرحش چو خر در گل بخفت شرح عشق و عاشقی هم عشق گفت ...

Yaaran-e-Anjuman, aadaab !

aaj phir aap kii Khidmat meiN apnii taazah-tareen Ghazal ke saath Haazir hooN ! ummeed hai k apnii qeematii aaraa se Hasb-e-ma'mool navaazeN ge ! :) shukriya

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kyooN na dil ...

Yaaran-e-anjuman, aadaab !

aaj aek a'rSa baa'd aap kii Khidmat meiN apnii aek taaza tareen Ghazal ke saath Haazir hooN, ummeed hai k apnii naaqidaana raaye se navaazeN ge!

shukriya

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zulf kii raat Dhal ...

Yaaran-e-anjuman, aadaab !

aaj aek a'rSa baa'd aap kii Khidmat meiN apnii aek taaza tareen Ghazal ke saath Haazir hooN, ummeed hai k apnii naaqidaana raaye se navaazeN ge!

shukriya

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zulf kii raat Dhal ...

Ziaa bh~aaii,

aadaab,

huZoor vaah! "curaYYaa" "murgh" aur "buland-parwaazi" ka paRh~ ker mujh~ay to Iqbaal Yaad aa gaYe. jaisay keh

"rif'at maiN maqaaSid ko hamdoSh-e-curaYYa ker, woh daagh-e-mahabbat day, jo chaand ko sharma day"


darj-e-zail aSh'aar bahut pasand aaye.

na poochh murGh-e ...

Saara behnaa, aadaab !

is Ghazal kaa lutf to ham pehle hii Uthaa chuke haiN ! magar Ghazal aisii hai k har baar paRhne se aek naye lutf kaa iHsaas hotaa hai ! yehi is kii kaamyaabii kii daleel bhii hai ! ;)
yuuN to poorii Ghazal hii Khoob hai albatta sher # 3 to "JAAN-LEVA" hai !! KhuSooSii daad ...

Yaaraan-e-anjuman, aadaab !

bahut pehle aek KhaaS mauqa' par aek she'r ho gayaa thaa

"jise na khool sakii gardish-e-zamaanaa bhii
kisii ki aaNkh ne voh raaz aashkaar kiyaa!"

aaj us aek she'r ne Ghazal kaa roop dhaar liyaa to sochaa kyooN na aap ki a'aadalat-e-a'aaliyaa meiN paish karooN .ummeed ...

muhammad_19k wrote:Zia Balaoch SaHeb

aik achhi ghazal kehnay aor pesh karne par daad o mubaarakbaad qubool kijiaye.

regards,
Muhammad K Siddiqui.

Khavar SaaHib, aadaab !

aap ke Haseen alfaaz ke liye aap kaa tah-e-dil se mamnoon hooN ! shukriya

Zia Baloch

Waqaar bhaa'ii, aadaab !

maiN is KhoobSoorat MeHfil meiN tah-e-dil se aap kaa isteqbaal kartaa hooN ! aap jaisii suKhanwaroN ki is MeHfil ko saKht zaroorat hai ! aap kii aamad se yaqeena" meHfil ki raunaqoN meiN izaafa hogaa ! Khush-aamadeed !! :)

aap kii Ghazal to SaaHib laa-javaab hai ! aap kaa ...

muHtaram janaab RuKhsaar Saahib, aadaab !

kaise mizaaj haiN ? jaisaa k aap jaante haiN k aap kii yeh Ghazal bahut pehle nazar se guzrii thii , magar ba-wujooh daad na de sakaa ! , sochaa aaj voh qrz chukaa dooN ! magar kahaaN SaaHib ! aap kii Ghazal is qadar u'mdah aur nafees hai k maiN laakh daad ...

Zia salaam,

w/salaam Saara behnaa jee :) w/salaam

barson baad ( :-) ) aate hain ghazal ke saath aate hain aur humara ghussa bhagaa dete hain

aise bhi bhai houte hain [-(

vuhii to ! aek to aate haiN barsooN baa'd aur opar se Ghazal bhii laate haiN GhuSSaa bhagaane vaalii , aise bhaa'ii hote ...