Guzarish#53 mah-e-Nov 2010 ke liye tarHee miSra'!

[Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar]

Yaaraan-e-meHfil aadaab-o-tasleemaat!


GuZarish#53 mah-e-Nov 2010 ke liye miSrah-e-tarH pesh-e-khidmat hai, jise deewaan-e-Khuwajah Haidar Ali "Atish" se muntakhib kiya geya hai, mulaHiZah keejiye.


"kahaN kahaN NaheeN maiN teree dastaaN sunta"


Qafiye: dastaaN, mehrbaaN, razdaaN, AasmaN waGhaerah.


radeef: suntaa.


BeHer kee is shakl ko beHer-e-mujtaC makhboon meHZoof maqt^a' kehte haiN.


afae'il: mu faa e' lun.....fa e' laa tun.....mu faa e' lun.....fao' lun
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tamaam SaaHibaan-e-qalam se shirkat kee apeel kee jaatee hai,


mutamanniy-e-shirkat
intezaamiyah UrduBandhan

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[sbashwar]

Sho'ara karam se guzarish hai Muzaffar Saheb ke diye gaye tarhi misra par apni shirkat se is moshaire ko kamyab kareN.

[Tanwir Phool]

MaiN nay apni ghazal paish kar di hai
Mulaahiza farmaai'ey,shukriyaa
Sab ko salaam