2 - ASAATAZA KI ISLAH ---- AIK KHEL

Post by **muhammad_19k** » Mon Mar 19, 2007 6:06 am

Salam yaaraan e bazm,

leejiaye aik oar sher likh rahaa hooN iss par tabaa aazamai ki jiaye.

dam miraa niklaa tairay waaday ke saath
tairi ghabrai hoee haaN ki taraH

hay na kamaal ka sha'er?

Laikin is sher meiN bhi iSlaah kar di gayee aor aik lafz tabdeel kar ke iss shaer ko haqeeqat ke qareeb tar kar diyaa gayaa. zara sochiaye kia tabdeeli ho sakti hai.

Ishaara: aik meHboob ko haaN kehay huway taSSawar kijiaye

Post by **sbashwar** » Fri Mar 23, 2007 4:04 pm

Khawar Saheb,
tairi khamoshi hoee haaN ki taraH

Shaier na hote hua khel mein hissa le raha houn.
Shukria

Post by **muhammad_19k** » Sat Mar 24, 2007 6:10 am

Saraa ji oar Sbashwar SaHib

Walaikum us Salam.

Khel meiN shirkat ke leeaye mamnoon hooN. maqSad sirf ye hai ke kuch damaghi zor aazmai ho ja-aye. aik do din kuch aor jawaabat ka intezaar karte haiN, phir meiN saHeeH jawab paish kar dooN ga.

Duagoa,
Muhammad K Siddiqui.

Post by **muhammad_19k** » Mon Mar 26, 2007 5:47 pm

Dosto,

Jawab is link par day dia gia hai,

http://forum.urdubandhan.com/phpBB2/vie ... 3037#33037

dua'aa goa,
Muhammad K. Siddiqui

Post by **muhammad_19k** » Mon Mar 26, 2007 5:48 pm

Dosto,

Jawab is link par day dia gia hai,

http://forum.urdubandhan.com/phpBB2/vie ... 3037#33037

dua'aa goa,
Muhammad K. Siddiqui