wah jawaid bhai bahut khoob..ghazal aapke makhsoos rang mein hai aur jadeediyat liye hue hain...sabhi sher aasaan aur achche hain...bas ek cheez ki kami lagi ke aapne girha nahi lagayi :D Daad pesh hai is umda kaavish par .

Shumaila

bahaa hai roz tahzeeb.o.adab ka yooN lahoo barsoN keh booRhi saas se laRtee rahee ghar meN bahoo barsoN wah wah bahut hi unique sher hai...! wohee batlayega kya cheez hai aazaar.e tanhayee keh tanhayee men jis ne ki ho khud se guftagoo barsoN wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!! is sher pe to dheron daad qub...

wah bahut khoob mujahid sahab!

wah dilshad sahab wah..ek arse baad idhar aayi to sab se pehle nazar aapki is khoobsurat ghazal pe pari aur daad diye bina na reh saki...bahut khoob..balki bahut hi khoob....!!!

NAYA SAAL MUBARAK JO AAPKO!

1, Jala kar daaman-e-hastee charaGhaaN kar liya maiN ne jahaaN ko Surat-e-aae'nah HeraaN kar liya maiN ne! 2, baRaa uljhaa huwaa thaa fikr-e-daoraaN meN dil-e-meHZooN Jigar ko aashnaa-e-saoZ-e-pinhaaN kar liya maiN ne! 3, nah mujh saa sar bakaf paao ge GulZaar-e-muHabbat meN lahu meN Doop kar jashn...

Hua jaata hun kuchh din se jo itna be-sar-o-saman
Ye lagta he tere milne ka saman kar liya men ne

wah bahut khoob..!

Salam sara jee kaisi hain aap?ek arse baad idhar ka rukh kiya aur aapki ye ghazal parhi to dil khush ho gaya..bahut hi khoobsurat dil ko chuune waali ghazal kahi hai..aisa laga jaise mere dil ki baat kahi gayi hai...ek ek sher bahut acche.... mujhe yeh aas thee koyee bahareN leker aayega "yeh k...

3. guloN ki mahak tou bohat Aarzee hai
woh Khushboo jo mahake Sadaa chaahatee hooN

6. miree KhuwaahishoN ki koii Hud nahiN hai
maiN kaise bataaooN maiN kya chaahatee hooN

[b]wah wah sara jee ye do sher bahut pasand aaye khaaskar ye #6...bahut khoob

wah bahut khoob ..hamari taraf se bhi daad qubool karein munir sahab:)

wah wah wah hasb-e-ma'amool umda kalaam rawaani se bharpoor..mazaa aa gaya parhke..bahut dher saair daad haazir hai ZIA

wah tahira jee wahhhhhhhhh ...saada alfaaz mein dil ko chuu lene waali ghazla kahi hai aapne..ek ek sher bahut dil ke nazdeek mehsoos hua..bade arse baad net ki mehfilon mein aana shuru hua hai ...kaisi hain aap??:)

oh maine reply type kiya tha ..jab post karne lagi to login msg aa gaya aur uske baad poori post gayab ho gayi:( khair salam kaise hain jawaid bhai??bahut arse baad net pe aana hua to nazar aap ki is khoobsurat ghazal pe pari..bahuuuuuuuuuut pasand aayi..ek ek sher umda hai khaaskar girah aur ye ash...

raahay baatil kau chaur kar humnay
haqparstoN kee pairawee kee hai

wah bahut khoob...!!!yun to poori ghazal khoob hai magar ye sher bahut pasand aaya..daad pesh hai haamid jee...

wah bahut khoob rehana jee..hamari jaanib se bhi daad qubool karein is khoobsurat ghazal pe!:)

shumaila