janab Anjum Akhtar sahib salaam e masnoon aapki ghazal ka her sher apni nauyat ke aitebaar se munfarid aur waqt ki zaban ban kar qari ke zahn o dil ko mutasir kar raha hai. bahut khoob meri dili mubarakbaad pesh e khidmat hai. is sher ne to poori qaum ki nabz par hath rakh dya hai, Allah aapko jazay...

Salam e masnoon Afzal shah sahib aap ki ghazal ka her sher apni tarakeeb aur fikr ke aitebaar se bahut pasand aaya. bataur e khas matla ,sher no. 2, 5 ,7, aur maqta bahut ziada achcay lage. sher no. 4 ke pahle misre mai typing error mahsoos hoti hai, ghaleban misra yoN tha vo kaun be adab tha kal ma...

Janab Ehtesham Anwer sahib salaam e masnoon aapki purehtesham ghazal nazarnawaz huvi. saray sher pasand aaye aur baaz ashaar ziada dil ko lage jo hazb e zail haiN. Junoo ki karfermai tu dekhoo KaheeN se chaak ab damaaN nahi hay junoN lagta hai bahut chalaak hogaya hai:) Hikayaat ek zara mujnooN ki s...

aap tamama ki mohabbatoN ke lye behad shukria, report bhi isi nacheez ne likhi jise aapne pasand farmaaya, mai mashkoor hoN.

Jawaid Sahib Salaam e masnoon mashallah naat e shareef ne behad mutassir kia kya jazbaat haiN aapke , Allah har eimaan wale ko madeene ki ziarat naseeb kare balke wahaN ki aap o hawa uski sansoN ko muesser ho jaaye. aap saare sher pasand aaye. aur hazb e zail sheroN ne dil ko tarhpa dia, jab bayaaN...

Salem Bhai aapka shukria ke aapne is mufasal report ko urdubandhan par pesh farmaya jo Sara Jabeen , Abdullah Nazir aur aapke alawa kai deegar urdu ke chahne waloN ki bhi site hai aur bataur e khas Abdullah Nazir sahib ki site hai jiska izhar site par chaspaN banner se bhi hota hai,, Allah isay abaa...

Mohatrama Sara sahiba Salaam e masnoon daad ka shukria, jab sher daad ke qabil haiN to phir ye bedaad kioN..aapke tassuraat aapke zahn ki paidawar nahi lagte, baharhaal aapne kaha hai to jawaban arz ye hai ke, sara ji aap to khud achi khasi shayera haiN aap kia nahi samajhte ke shayer jis muashire m...

shahsawari ke khar sawaari hai -Aik Taaza Ghazal

Jeddah mai mushaira

Bradar e Aziz Zia Assalam Alaikum wa rahma Aapki nazm apni kaifiatoN ke aitebaar se nihayat purasar nazm kahi ja sakti hai. aur andaaz e bayaan ki khoobsurti lahje ki rawaani aap ko aik kaamyaab shayer balke fikri safar mai apni manziloN ko choone wala shayer tasleem karwaarahi hai. is had tak aap ...

Nadir Khan sahib , aur Tahira Masood sahiba baat nikle gi to phir door talak jaayegi............................balke jaarahi hai. chand ashaar isi hawaale se......mukhtalif shora ke mulahiza farmaiN.. diloN ka dard tatoolo yahi hai raah e najaat larazte kaNpte hoNtoN ka ehteraam karo hai dil ke lye...

Tahera ji ki nazm bahut pasand aai, zaher hai aik shayer aik qalamkar apne atraaf ke haalaat ki akkasi hi kar sakta hai aur karna chahaiye. jahaN tak dukhoN ka taalluq hai Nadir khan sahib ne bhi bilkul sahi farmaya , dukh aur dard e dil hi to Allaama Iqbal ki zaban mai yoN bayan kiye jasakte haiN k...

saara ji
salam e masnoon
ghazal ka har sher bahut khoosurat hai. is murassa ghazal ke lye mubarakbaad

Mahtab